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I walk into your hospital room and take a good look at what I don’t want to believe is true
I have to turn and walk away from you
I can’t let you see me cry
It’s hard to look at you and not have tears in my eyes
It’s hard to watch you helplessly as you slowly die
It’s hard to bring back the memories and see
This isn’t who you used to be
It’s hard to see you in so much pain
It’s hard to realize you don’t know my name
It’s hard to let go of you
After everything that we’ve been through
It’s hard to hold back all the tears
Remembering you loved me for all those years
It’s hard to take your curious stair
Watching you wonder who’s there
I tell you who I am but I know you don’t know
And I kiss you, hug you, say goodbye, and let you go
©2004-2009 ~ImmortalInnocence
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Beautifully written. I can almost see it as if I were in the room. I love the rhyme scheme as well. The layout of flawless. I love it...and it's is so hard to say goodbye...

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.I Can't Saw Off These Horns, But I Can Learn To Fly.
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Thank you so much!

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle
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i totally love the reality and sheer beauty of it -very well done a definite faver!!

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when life turns sour
death turns sweet
when dreams go away
nightmares arrive
when it all begins
its really all over


---- "never tell the secret of the angel in hell" ---- The Phantom - Phantom of the Opera ----
:iconimmortalinnocence:
thank you very much!

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle
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Wow Ally. This reminds me of when my grandpa was dying...He couldn't do or say much but he knew who I was. He was my favorite person in the world and it killed me to lose him :( If you ever need to talk I'm here.

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Love is the way of the world.
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thanx. Now i know someone who knows how i feel, that's good. not your grandpa dying, just the knowin how i feel thing

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle
:iconsuperblypassive:
like I said anytime you want to talk...there may be some tears involved but crying can be good sometimes :'(

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Love is the way of the world.

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