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She stairs at the ground
Her own blood stains the earth
Her own tears wash away the memories
Death would be so much easier

The memory of his hand gripping hers
The memory of his arm around her shoulder
The memory of the embrace they held
The memory of it being ripped away
Wouldn’t death be easier?

The feeling she got when he looked in her eyes
The feeling she got when he sat by her side
The feeling she got when he held her in his arms
The feeling she got with him, like she couldn’t be harmed
Wouldn’t death be easier?

The tears she cried that stained his shirt
The tears she cried that fell to the earth
The tears she cried when thinking of him
The tears she cried when the night fell
Death would be easier
©2004-2009 ~ImmortalInnocence
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Well It's not one of my best, but it's also not one of my worst so comments?

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:iconvisiblyinvisible:
Wow Ally, amazing, and deep. Is that about...mr.fruitcake (that works on so many levels :lol:) but *hugs* :hug: It's Amazing, and very beautiful, I think it's one of the best ones you've written weather or not you think so.
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No it's about someone else

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle
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Yeah I know, you just told me lol hehehe
:iconalone24:
Omg i love it !!!!!!! i can relate to this soo much !!!! :clap:

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You're as welcome as cancer
But my door is always locked.
:iconimmortalinnocence:
Thank you and thanx for the fav!

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle
:iconalone24:
No problem!

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You're as welcome as cancer
But my door is always locked.
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wow.. that hits deeply, like way >_> i hate Chase... i am not sure the direction i took it was what you were going for, but it could have been if so i am sorry :cling: it is beautifully written i love your work

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Thank you very much, and yes lol that was the direction i was going the hate thing (except I hated a guy named Matt) lol

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Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life, can you give it to them Frodo?-Gandalf

The quest stands upon the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will fall to the ruin of all-Galadrielle

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